Don'T Be a Buzz Kill

The night is not young. Soon bars will close down.
You'll pay up your tab or pay for a round.

Did you get any numbers to put in your phone?
Are you leaving with someone or leaving alone?

I hope you have mingled the time you were here,
or did you just sit crying into your beer?

You have no excuses. You're not the only
person with hardships or thinking you're lonely.

Before they begin making last calls tonight,
don't be a buzz kill. Go do something right.

See folks all around you in this crowded bar.
You think there is no one as sad as you are?

Get up off that bar stool for a night you'll not rue.
Last call for lonely hearts. What will you do?


Nov. 10, 2019 for Line Gauthier's
 'LAST CALL FOR LONELY HEARTS' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 11:43 AM
This delightful poem is so toe-tapping cool, AD! Has such a "Heart of Saturday Night" feel to it. (All my PSoup peeps, that is a classic Diana Krall song.) This sassy, seven Couplets are all paired up nice. Fine mellow write. Love and best holiday wishes.
May Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 2:45 PM
Very nicely done Andrea..GL in the Contest...
Makama Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 9:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
Ravidas Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 2:15 AM
Wow, an amphibrach. It's a pretty rare metrical foot. In Russian it's even rarer. I think this is the first amphibrach I see in PS, except for limericks. By the way congrats, Andrea)
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:03 PM
gosh, I did not know I was writng one of those things!! I just got the idea to do that type of metrical beat and went with it. Thanks, Kurt.
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Delightful poem, Andrea. Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your podium finish.
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:03 PM
thanks so much, Line.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 3:35 AM
A wonderful write, Andrea. I wouldn't have thought of this. It's great. Love and prayers, Gina
Na Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 11:48 PM
well done Andrea. thats a typical bar every night huh lol. Cant say I`ve ever been to a bar ( I dont drink ) . Good luck in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 1:08 AM
I haven't been in them either!!! Just watched a bit of Cheers!
Gupta Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 10:59 PM
Nicely penned Last Call ... Somewhere within, a fine touch of philosophy too ... enjoyed your poem ....
Poetry Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 8:34 PM
If we don't get out there we will never meet anyone
Gutmacher Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 7:20 PM
I enjoyed the insight of the poem. Nice work.
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