don't ask how I'm feeling

Don't ask me how I'm feeling 

Just wait another day 

Moon and Mars are turning 

They have much more to say 


Don't leave me in the evening 

Willing waiting for a sky like

A truth a tune a writing 

That says more than goodbye 


I'll tell you what I'm seeing 

Doors from that past all closed

Like them and me and meeting 

With why and when with those


I'll tell that there's sorrows 

With the rain all clear to see

You and they are speaking 

A weeping willow tree of me 


I'll be here in the morning 

And the truth be told with words

The thing that always missing 

Is what I saw and felt and heard


Don't tell me that your caring

With a silence clear as day

All and all it's what I'm seeing 

Is that we'll have much more to say


There's days and years all passing

Like you did that when I was gone

So I'll say it's a Happy's Ending

And just turn the tune's your song


Always answer always fail me

The hurts the hits the test

Just let me tell you quickly

Loving you was always best!
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Smith  Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 5:26 PM
Mood swings - when up and down don't really mean anything. Don't ask I'll be ok tomorrow.
Nelson Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Thanks Alison, along we go!
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