Dont Approve

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If you said you loved me, why did you let me go.
If you said this is the hardest thing you ever had to do, Then why so

Screw the age difference, dont listen to what others say
Just keep on loving me, and telling me why you feel this way

We were better off, not having a worry
Now everyone jumped in and made our visions blurry

Your godparents, your dad and maybe a few more
Why should you listen and have to close that door

You love was true, but got blocked by many
I'll give them my opinion, it only cost a penny

Leave us alone, were as happy as can be
Your just caught up in yourself, blind and cant see

We dont need your thoughts, just keep them inside
Im sick of all your non-sense, just give up and dont try

I love her, she loves me 
What's the big deal
About how we feel

I'm sorry you dont approve, but our love will not be denied
Forever I'll be happy, with her by my side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/21/2010 9:14:00 AM
sweet and loving your write is, it's sad when people don't agree with age difference what should they care love's hard to find and when you have it reguardless age difference why should we have to let it go?, enjoyed this write...P.D.
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