Don'T

Don't give me too much
I'll expect to be touched
With the
Mind of  a kind
rewinding my rhyming
in beats of a drum
giving me something
that
heaven can't touch
an
emotional rush
Baby
dial it down
or 
I'll go the round
with
fantasies of you
all
wrapped up in truth
Please
let me breathe
or
I'll have to leave
you panting for more
Knocking for sure
on 
heavenly doors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 2, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Very cool Holly, I can hear a cadence in this because I know of your admiration for rap and Eminem. Nicely done.
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December 2, 2016 at 6:58 PM
just experimenting. unfinished. but like to share that process with others. thanks Chris:)
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