Don'T

Don't tell me you love me
On a post it note
Don't tell me you care
When you just want to stare
Don't tell me youre mine
On the back of a dime
Don't tell me to wait
I've gone it's too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Scott Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 12:27 PM
just passing by again alredy comented on this one but cool write hope you find love again xxdavidscott
Lamoureux Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Stupid fellow! Some guys don't get it till its to late. Good poem.
O'Driscoll Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 3:51 PM
We live and learn Richard, thank you, love Elizabeth
Esquire Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Dear Elizabeth, I have to agree with Tim's comment there are those kind of men that hurt not only the women in thier lives but the Loving men that are out there LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 4:56 AM
Yes indeed this is very true of both sexes,especially in todays society.
Ryerson Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:59 PM
That's telling him Elizabeth!... Not referring to the gentleman you wrote about but some men are egotistical, insecure idiots trying to show off how many hearts they've broken and how many adoring but gullible ladies are still chasing them - Tim
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 5:41 PM
Yes indeed Tim, but they will meet their match sooner or later :) thank you for your comment, love elizabeth
Palmer Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:28 PM
lol,sorry lad,Elizabeth is off and running,nice write
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 5:38 PM
:) thank you Richard, love elizabeth
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Sometimes us guys can be a bit dense. He must be kicking himself. You know what they say about those guys that stare!
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 4:06 PM
:) indeed, love elizabeth
Scott Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 12:43 PM
i agree you dont know what yohave till its gone nice write thanks for coments xx davidscott
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Thank you David, love elizabeth xx
Breidenthal Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Excellent verse. Very touching and powerful, through only a few words! Always, Laura
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Laura, love elizabeth
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 7:35 PM
He was daft and not deft/and won't know why you left. Enjoyed your poem.
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Jon, love elizabeth
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 6:26 PM
words are nothing without feelings...yet they say most don't know what they have until it's gone... nice poem :)
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 7:25 PM
Yes indeed we can all talk the talk, but who can walk the walk, thank you for your comment, love elizabeth
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