Don'T 2

Don't give me too much
I'll expect to be touched
With a mind of a kind
rewinding my rhyming
with you, I'll succumb 
giving into utopia
that heaven can't touch
an
emotional rush
Baby
let's fool around
or
I'll go aground 
with 
fantasies of you
all wrapped up in truth
Please
let me believe
or I'll have to grieve
with
you ranting for more
knocking on
heavenly shores
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 11, 2017 at 1:53 AM
When you write lyrics, do you see yourself performing them? I sometimes write SLAM for other people to perform on stage, and i always see/hear myself in my head while writing.
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January 11, 2017 at 9:31 AM
I depends on the write. I'm just discovering who I am as an artist Darren. It was locked away for so many years. Music, dance, poetry,,stories,abstract art, design. It's all my interests. Hard to contain and focus on one thing. For a Swedish girl from miichigan. Rap is my ultimate Love Relationship..:)
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December 2, 2016 at 3:29 PM
It just keeps getting better and better. :)
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December 2, 2016 at 7:08 PM
early stages of experimentation..thanks Chris for being my cheerleader..
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