Don'T 2

Don't give me too much I'll expect to be touched With a mind of a kind rewinding my rhyming with you, I'll succumb giving into utopia that heaven can't touch an emotional rush Baby let's fool around or I'll go aground with fantasies of you all wrapped up in truth Please let me believe or I'll have to grieve with you ranting for more knocking on heavenly shores

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Darren White

Date: 1/11/2017 1:53:00 AM

When you write lyrics, do you see yourself performing them? I sometimes write SLAM for other people to perform on stage, and i always see/hear myself in my head while writing.

Holly Bohto
Date: 1/11/2017 9:31:00 AM

I depends on the write. I'm just discovering who I am as an artist Darren. It was locked away for so many years. Music, dance, poetry,,stories,abstract art, design. It's all my interests. Hard to contain and focus on one thing. For a Swedish girl from miichigan. Rap is my ultimate Love Relationship..:)

Chris Green

Date: 12/2/2016 3:29:00 PM

It just keeps getting better and better. :)

Holly Bohto
Date: 12/2/2016 7:08:00 PM

early stages of experimentation..thanks Chris for being my cheerleader..