Dont

Dont take me for soon I will be gone all you ever wanted of the person you thought you'd won I told you that you have to earn a special gilf likr that guess you didnt belive me now look what all you lack I have been thinking quite aklot ,ay

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 4:35:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michaela. A work in progress maybe? If you would like to have more of your poetry read limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol