Done Yet?

the house is busy
in and out
shopping errands lawn garbage
cars shifting, boys shouting
basketball, baseball, dog leash
hockey skates
games
scores
food
how many for dinner?
laundry dishwasher soap
bleach
ah bleach
ice tea on the porch
dog at my feet
newspapers on the table
later, maybe later
grocery list
drug store
exhange shoes
oil change
tickets?
deposits?
checkbook?
are we done yet?
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:45:00 PM
~lol~ No, I guess we are never done. Thanks so much Veronica for stopping by and your thoughtful wishes. Yes, i am stressed out of my mind. Cannot wait for normalcy (whatever that is) and to return to this site the way I used to be here. Till then keep writing and take care. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 6/17/2009 6:57:00 PM
Sounds like a standard day to me :) Enjoyed it, Anton - www.foesofprose.com
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Date: 6/17/2009 11:14:00 AM
as the old saying goes a womans work is never done LOL we always find something that needs doing it's just so natural and it's what we do best, and even when every thing is done we still find more because we just love to make sure our loved ons are cared fore and papmered, God bless you from diane
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