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The words "I Love You" spring from your lips, But, actions show that I'm barely a friend. Your "Love" poisons in little sips, The way you act is hard to defend. Why do you even bother to pretend? I have tried and tried and tried again. I just don't know what you want me to do? You are as stable as quick sand. I gave my heart and soul to you. It kills me to say, we are through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 7:35:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Christopher. Love, Carol
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/22/2012 3:35:00 PM
Thank You, Carol.
Date: 2/21/2012 7:59:00 PM
done, finished Finito , over!! Good one, Christopher. the line I liked best: stable as quick sand!!!
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/21/2012 9:56:00 PM
Yep! Hit the road Jack and don't you come back! LOL! Thank you.
Date: 2/20/2012 8:32:00 AM
Nicely penned, Christopher.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/21/2012 6:02:00 AM
thank you!!
Date: 2/20/2012 5:41:00 AM
profound and straight to the point, like this Christopher. harry
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/20/2012 6:38:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/17/2012 2:19:00 PM
Heartfelt piece. Many congrats, my friend : )
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/17/2012 10:18:00 PM
Thank You!

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