Christopher Bunton Poet Quintain (English)

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The words "I Love You" spring from your lips,

But, actions show that I'm barely a friend.

Your "Love" poisons in little sips,

The way you act is hard to defend.

Why do you even bother to pretend?



I have tried and tried and tried again.

I just don't know what you want me to do?

You are as stable as quick sand.

I gave my heart and soul to you.

It kills me to say, we are through.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2012 at 7:35 AM I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Christopher. Love, Carol Christopher Bunton February 22, 2012 at 3:35 PM Thank You, Carol.

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2012 at 7:59 PM done, finished Finito , over!! Good one, Christopher. the line I liked best: stable as quick sand!!! Christopher Bunton February 21, 2012 at 9:56 PM Yep! Hit the road Jack and don't you come back! LOL! Thank you.

Dinda Minardi February 20, 2012 at 8:32 AM Nicely penned, Christopher. Christopher Bunton February 21, 2012 at 6:02 AM thank you!!

Harry Horsman February 20, 2012 at 5:41 AM profound and straight to the point, like this Christopher. harry Christopher Bunton February 20, 2012 at 6:38 AM Thank you!

Jack Horne February 17, 2012 at 2:19 PM Heartfelt piece. Many congrats, my friend : ) Christopher Bunton February 17, 2012 at 10:18 PM Thank You!