Don and Vienna Couplets

I kept calling him Ron instead of Don As I wondered why his eyes never shone Then he accidentally called me Elaine Instead of Vie and I went insane, Me brain me braine, Echo’s again, again, am I insane, Words go round and round, the pain, Of Vie and sweet Elaine Don
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 7, 2013 at 9:48 AM
I love the Vie And Don couplet... Elaine is sweet... .... great couplets... love PD
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June 19, 2013 at 12:19 AM
ha another one that isn't locked up yet, well done Don nice to see another friend of my little flower xx
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