Domino Vows

Like dominoes the vows did fall Till there was nothing left at all --- Promises and vows you never meant to keep Constantly haunt me and keep me from sleep. Wayward ways from yesterday Have turned your world around. And visions of tomorrow Are nowhere to be found. Late night hideaways Hide secrets by the score But morning light will find you Back knocking at my door. But broken hearted lovers Don't make the best of friends And when a heart can hurt no more Even friendship finds an end. Broken vows and promises Have a certain way Of coming back to haunt you --- And true love flies away

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/9/2013 9:36:00 PM

Love sure can ruin many things. It can end friendships and it can even end relationships with family members. And, if we are not careful, it can ruin our own lives, as well. Really great writing, Jake!...Thank you for the great comments. I am really enjoying PoetrySoup! I have had more success that I thought I would. And, I have made some new friends, too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2013 11:00:00 AM

loved seeing this on Nathan's winners list. One of yours I had somehow missed before. Congrats on your well deserved win, John.

John Posey
Date: 7/12/2013 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, my sweet friend. You always brighten my day....Jake

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 7/11/2013 10:12:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win. AO

John Posey
Date: 7/11/2013 4:01:00 PM

Thanks AO, I appreciate your visit..... Jake

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/10/2013 5:24:00 PM

Awesome and lovely entry..Congrats on your win...

John Posey
Date: 7/10/2013 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, friend, I appreciate your kind words.... Jake

Len Gasun

Date: 7/10/2013 3:08:00 PM

My BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN & VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM my dear friend, John! Thank you so much for sharing! I love it and so enjoyed! Have a great day! love lots, Leonora

John Posey
Date: 7/10/2013 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Leonora, Your comments are always a bright spot in my day.... Hugs.... Jaike

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/10/2013 1:08:00 PM

John I'm so happy your poem won. I kew it had to place. Congratulations! Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey
Date: 7/10/2013 3:21:00 PM

Thanks, my dear friend. I felt it had a chance, but I am always grateful to the judges... Hugs.... Jake

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/10/2013 6:50:00 AM

You pull the heart strings perfectly. "Visions of tomorrow are nowhere to be found" does certainly created a haunting memory for broken hearted lovers... powerful :)

John Posey
Date: 7/10/2013 11:36:00 AM

Thank you, Karen. your comments are always welcome...Jake