Dominion

a loud boom reports ~ this is not Eden, for death is very much alive

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/6/2022 8:25:00 PM

Truer words never written. This is not Eden. It's not even a Garden. We've been left with the Snakes -- Biden, Trump, Clinton, Pelosi, Obama, Lightfoot, Putin, Xi, Kim, Labrov, Erdogan, Assad, Nasrallah, Whitmer, Hochul, Kanya, Fuentes, just to name a few! Vot a voild!

Jeff Kyser
Date: 12/7/2022 4:26:00 AM

It's hunting season around here (probably everywhere), so I was walking peacefully with the dog, but all around, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM. I get it and all, not anti-hunting, just not Eden :-)

Jeff Kyser
Date: 12/7/2022 4:25:00 AM

Like when the Lord tells Samuel, "It is not you they have rejected, but they have rejected me as their king." So we get these instead...