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Domestic Bliss

toilet paper roll 
spinning over or under... 
   marriage litmus test 

        10 Jan 2021

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2021

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April 8, 2021 at 9:42 PM

lol ~ good one

January 15, 2021 at 5:08 AM

Definitely over the top! Congratulations on your win David!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 15, 2021 at 2:11 AM

- Many have chosen this theme ...( toilet paper ), well done, David - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 14, 2021 at 6:37 PM

I know ! what's up with that ~ there's only one right way to roll it

January 14, 2021 at 6:25 PM

On a Roll Ha Ha....Congrats on your win David :))

January 14, 2021 at 4:30 PM

Love this, David! Congratulations! Let them roll!

January 14, 2021 at 4:28 PM

David, you speak the truth with humor! Congratulations on your win! Still smiling! :)

January 14, 2021 at 3:05 PM

Dropping back with many congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx

January 14, 2021 at 2:26 PM

Nice winning write, David. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2021 at 12:59 PM

always you are so clever, David. Congrats on your win

January 14, 2021 at 12:26 PM

Very good :) Mine's whatever way the wind blows.

January 14, 2021 at 11:53 AM

David, congratulations on your first place win with your witty and funny poem!

January 11, 2021 at 4:44 AM

ha ha ha mine is an under definitely lol:-) really made me lol:-) hugs jan xx

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