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I am not sure if the form of acrostic, monorhyme has ever been explored as a legitimate poetic form, however here is my offering......

Dazzled by something worth comparing; our friendships common majesty Offers without warning while in unfamiliar waters; we may both be Lost in foggy noise; we are individuals; of sound triviality Passing millions of years since our divergency Horrific is our view; it is found of your arrogancy Inside minds the size of yours, love grows the same, developmentally NO, we see in black and white; squandered, you are a gifted tragedy Save my bottled nose will never understand; the pineapple mess outside; that is sweet within humanity

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Paige Hind

Date: 1/23/2024 6:06:00 PM

I think this poem is just right, I never saw one like this, but we should always explore our creativity...well done, gifted light-maker! This poem needs healing- I hope one day all your wounds will fade, because your love is so obvious and great. <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 1/24/2024 4:29:00 PM

The strength of anything, emotions, a building, or an ideal is the support it has.... you are a great support.... I hope I return the favor! With warmest light. A.S.