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I am not sure if the form of acrostic, monorhyme has ever been explored as a legitimate poetic form, however here is my offering......

DOLPHINS

Dazzled by something worth comparing; our friendships common majesty 
Offers without warning while in unfamiliar waters; we may both be 
Lost in foggy noise; we are individuals; of sound triviality
Passing millions of years since our divergency
Horrific is our view; it is found of your arrogancy
Inside minds the size of yours, love grows the same, developmentally
NO, we see in black and white; squandered, you are a gifted tragedy
Save my bottled nose will never understand; the pineapple mess outside; that is sweet within humanity
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January 23, 2024 at 6:06 PM
I think this poem is just right, I never saw one like this, but we should always explore our creativity...well done, gifted light-maker! This poem needs healing- I hope one day all your wounds will fade, because your love is so obvious and great. <3
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January 24, 2024 at 4:29 PM
The strength of anything, emotions, a building, or an ideal is the support it has.... you are a great support.... I hope I return the favor! With warmest light. A.S.
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