Doleful Rain

bright dreams paler hue
black clouds on my horizon
streams of misery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Culverhouse Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 5:23 PM
we had the rain today, misery was not far away.
Kendrick Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 3:57 PM
That is some more rain for sure..Enjoyed your creative work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Nicely worded haiku with good images, Stephen
Laan Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Excellent haiku Stephen, perfect word choice.
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