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Doleful Rain

bright dreams paler hue black clouds on my horizon streams of misery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 5:23:00 PM
we had the rain today, misery was not far away.
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Date: 1/25/2011 3:57:00 PM
That is some more rain for sure..Enjoyed your creative work..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2011 2:59:00 PM
Nicely worded haiku with good images, Stephen
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Date: 1/25/2011 2:47:00 PM
Excellent haiku Stephen, perfect word choice.
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