Dolce Far Niente

Slowly, Mickey Mouse wafted by
as I gazed at the cerulean sky.
The warmth of a cool Chardonnay
I’d sipped at the end of the day;
had me drift in and out of a sleep.

As Mickey transformed to a sheep
all my thoughts coast into a haze.
While the hammock so gently sways
my conscious is thoroughly freed,
from the book I intended to read.

The sheep, soon pierced by a jet;
floats like a fluffy barrette
past the tops of the trees
blown by the soft summer breeze
as the last of the cobwebs dissolve.

I’ll make it my earnest resolve,
I say to myself, or out loud,
as I watch another white cloud,
troubles can take a backseat;
doing nothing at all is so sweet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/21/2023 5:55:00 AM
Charming, Terry! I smiled at first line, and I hope you don’t mind…took a sip of that Chardonnay;) Congratulations! The tops for me!
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/21/2023 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I appreciate your visits and kind comments
Date: 9/21/2023 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your top-winning placement, Terry. Your poem is wonderful
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/21/2023 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much I appreciate it
Date: 9/4/2023 11:00:00 PM
I wish ! Its a well written fanciful dream to some of us. made me smile.
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Date: 9/10/2023 3:19:00 AM
Thank you SV, have a great day my friend
Date: 9/4/2023 7:36:00 AM
Wonderful, Terry:)
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/10/2023 3:20:00 AM
Thank you Joanna
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