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Doin'T Leave Me Behind As I Cry

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You have said you love me told me at some point each day, I love you, we hang together, we play together, you let me get my way Had some rough times, even so through all of it, we stayed together we worked it out as you know not always in agreement… When our day was through we let it go worked for each other to survive eat together, sleep, toiled ya know you promised you would not die or disappear Then one day you say you are going on your own way, I say where “Really“ just like that, leaving somewhere What is that, what is wrong, what purpose Dad is mom driving you away, am I will you be coming back soon, go, why have you been lying to me, us - Good bye now I’m left to wonder, what could I’ve said “as I cry”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/24/2013 3:27:00 PM
Awww, the cry of all 'divorced' children. I feel for you, Perry. I also did the divorce bit and prepared my children as best I could, but they still hurt in the end. Good write, my friend. Licia :-)
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Perry Campanella
Date: 8/18/2023 8:46:00 AM
Hi, Licia -Thank You for your special comment - it is something to cry about - stay safe too! Perry C.

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