Dogs-We Are Returning

we are leaving soon
through the heart of the 
river compassion
back home to the 
solace warmth of
the caring earth
pink room with 
purple light
golden flowers
hungry dogs of black
brown white and mixed
floating in the chained
expectation of
broken love
we are returning
soon believe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Spagnola Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 12:26 AM
I'm not going to pretend that I get you, but your flow and imagery are awesome!...:), jill
Osho Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 1:07 AM
thank you jill. it is like abstract art. giving the viewer a chance to interpret what she wants to.the days of sonnets rhymes couplets and those sorts belong to the horse age. now we are in the jet age i believe.i just write on the spur of the moment and express unconcerned about judges and those sort
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