Dogs Bark

dogs bark - -
a hedgehog curls up
into a ball

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Andrea Dietrich

April 3, 2012 at 9:07 PM

LOVE this one. Cute image.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 2, 2012 at 2:22 PM

my mini cast gone as well .. Mrs. Frankenstein's hand emerged.. ah.. but the air will heal it now.. oh.. glad u lost the gauze luv.. feel better..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

April 1, 2012 at 5:58 PM

Great haiku and perfectly written! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2012 at 5:41 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..If for a contest, reads like a winner...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Judy Ball

April 1, 2012 at 2:21 PM

Poor little hedgehog was just doing his thing and the dog scared him. Cute write my friend. It made me smile. God Bless, Happy Easter, JB

Russell Sivey

April 1, 2012 at 12:31 PM

I think this write is a very good rendition of what happens between a dog and a hedgehog! I love this poem immensely my friend! Great Work!!

Sean Kelly

April 1, 2012 at 11:42 AM

AS our cat discovered to his displeasure . Hope your health issues are A O K , Jack ...

Nette Onclaud

April 1, 2012 at 10:52 AM

your image is so catchy and well done, jack.. a great 'ku !.. winning wishes if for a contest and huggs!:)

Elizabeth Wesley

April 1, 2012 at 10:29 AM

Smart hedgehog I'd say, dogs think everything is fun without any guilt at all. Your message is awsome with so few words! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 1, 2012 at 10:12 AM

oh poor hedgehog .. if he heard my pups bark he would run for a cave.. they are so huge now.. nice visions of animals frolicking luv.. u are most welcome .. u are a dear friend.. and I have not forgotten our collab .. soon as another contest appears asking for a collab .. we are a team luv..

Debbie Guzzi

April 1, 2012 at 9:49 AM

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