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dogs bark - - a hedgehog curls up into a ball

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2012 9:07:00 PM

LOVE this one. Cute image.

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 4/2/2012 2:22:00 PM

my mini cast gone as well .. Mrs. Frankenstein's hand emerged.. ah.. but the air will heal it now.. oh.. glad u lost the gauze luv.. feel better..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/1/2012 5:58:00 PM

Great haiku and perfectly written! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2012 5:41:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..If for a contest, reads like a winner...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 4/1/2012 2:21:00 PM

Poor little hedgehog was just doing his thing and the dog scared him. Cute write my friend. It made me smile. God Bless, Happy Easter, JB

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/1/2012 12:31:00 PM

I think this write is a very good rendition of what happens between a dog and a hedgehog! I love this poem immensely my friend! Great Work!!

Sean Kelly

Date: 4/1/2012 11:42:00 AM

AS our cat discovered to his displeasure . Hope your health issues are A O K , Jack ...

nette onclaud

Date: 4/1/2012 10:52:00 AM

your image is so catchy and well done, jack.. a great 'ku !.. winning wishes if for a contest and huggs!:)

elizabeth wesley

Date: 4/1/2012 10:29:00 AM

Smart hedgehog I'd say, dogs think everything is fun without any guilt at all. Your message is awsome with so few words! :)

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 4/1/2012 10:12:00 AM

oh poor hedgehog .. if he heard my pups bark he would run for a cave.. they are so huge now.. nice visions of animals frolicking luv.. u are most welcome .. u are a dear friend.. and I have not forgotten our collab .. soon as another contest appears asking for a collab .. we are a team luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/1/2012 9:49:00 AM

You know you have accomplished an understanding of what comprises a haiku would you like to join our site? Let me know. Light & Love [Mine are in a traditional formate, 5/7/5 was an incorrect western approach which at the time did not take into consideration the the 2 languages english & japanese do not treat SOUND the same way..so anything with 2 parts less than 17 syllables is a haiku [man may also be included for he is a part of nature]

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2012 9:14:00 AM

Good to be reading you here today.... Hope you health is better my friend... Michael