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Doggone Night

Doggone night… Once there was an old and lonesome crow. I‘ll tell the story the way I know. The crow was so dark, darker than night. darkness with shadows, gathering fright. One day between the dark and the dawn, the air was heavy the moon withdrawn; He saw the light at the end of the sky, he got afraid then he jumped to fly. He hated the light as much as pain, nothing worth seeing, in his campaign. Nothing to see when you live in dark, darkness will never let flowers spark. He flew, but light came faster and fast, nothing in this life will last till last. His body got tired, also his wing. He landed so near, a pearly spring. He drank some water and washed his pain, He did some cawing, crying in vain. He asked the water, why you’re so bright? Why are you sparkling in such delight? Water responded that it is light! Light is the one that is always bright. Crow asked the water, what is this light? I came from a place as dark as night. I eat carrion, dirty, and foul, my only friend was an old horned owl. Tell me more about brightness of light, I am so tired of this doggone night. I want to live in colors and dyes, not living my life in dark disguise. Living in darkness, always at night, gloomy shadows make darken all light. The spring told the Crow, go ask the wind, He will tell you then, how you have sinned. Not knowing the light, not seeing, sun, this way of living must be undone. The crow asked the wind how do you fly? How do you paint the blue, in the sky? The wind told him, your answer is light, it comes from the sun, that’s warm and white. It is the beauty, full of delight. No more to live in the endless night. You go and you seek the source of light. Ascend to the plain at highest height. To see for yourself, what is to see? Maybe you find out, how can it be. Like an arrow, crow jumped and then gone, searching for the sun, seeking the dawn. Next day, I saw him dancing at noon, kissing rainbow, till late afternoon. 12/18/16 Haloo For: NV

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Date: 7/1/2017 8:59:00 PM
A vivid tale well written glad he found the light.
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Date: 7/2/2017 12:40:00 AM
Alesia, nice seeing you my dear..... Thanks.... I wish you the best of light.....Pashang
Date: 2/7/2017 1:57:00 AM
Soup Mail.'
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Date: 2/7/2017 1:42:00 AM
My thanks to you on the reading of this Pashang.' It holds a personal message for me.' I was not sure when I began to read the first words if it would carry through.' However 'it does' may God bless you abundantly.'
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Date: 2/7/2017 11:35:00 AM
I read your message, Thank you and God bless you too...
Date: 1/25/2017 11:44:00 AM
An amazing story poem Pashang. As a Christian I understand the joy of the light. A beautifully written poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/25/2017 2:34:00 PM
thank you I'm glad you like my stories. I like stories a lot
Date: 1/25/2017 6:25:00 AM
Oh so refreshing to read this wonder...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/25/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you my friend you're so kind
Date: 1/15/2017 7:06:00 PM
Well done story poem. Reminded me of Aesope's Fables. Loved it A seven from me. Thanks so much for the kind words on my "One Year Later" the sequel to "A Christmas Story Told By The Dog". God Bless, JB
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/18/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you dear..
Date: 1/15/2017 1:35:00 PM
Hi Pashang my first visit to you. A delightful narrative that read like a nursery rhyme or lullaby for adults trying to also find the light. May your light shine on Jannie
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Date: 1/18/2017 11:16:00 AM
Thank you my friend..
Date: 1/6/2017 7:49:00 AM
I have read this enchanting poem to my son, he loves it, as do I my friend. Super 7 and adding to my fav list--write on..
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Date: 1/6/2017 5:57:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it.... Pashang
Date: 12/31/2016 8:15:00 AM
He finally saw the light!...Great Personification Pashang...
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Date: 12/31/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thanks my friend .....
Date: 12/30/2016 9:01:00 PM
A very enjoyable piece, got me smiling :)
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Date: 12/31/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Akkina...
Date: 12/30/2016 7:54:00 PM
Very entertaining story Pashang:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2016 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 12/22/2016 8:34:00 PM
Very nice story , Pashang, i love the flow, and the rhyme.. Merry Christmas. Hugs Eve
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/23/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve, you are so kind.... Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 12/22/2016 8:08:00 PM
this is wonderful, and how he was kissing the rainbow till late afternoon. A very cute ending!
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Date: 12/23/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.... Merry Christmas
Date: 12/22/2016 1:54:00 PM
I am happy to see you speak of light Pashang. You have opened the door to us again.
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Date: 12/22/2016 5:55:00 PM
Thanks Jean... my door is always open for you
Date: 12/22/2016 1:24:00 PM
A very enjoyable poem, Pashang. So pleased that the lonely crow came to find and appreciate the light! ~ May you have a joyous and blessed Christmas!! Best regards // paul
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Date: 12/22/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Paul... you're very kind.. Merry Christmas to you as well.... Pashang
Date: 12/21/2016 9:04:00 PM
A lovely piece with a great message...Have a Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/22/2016 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Tim... Merry Christmas to you as well.... Pashang
Date: 12/21/2016 9:56:00 AM
A very entertaining read my friend:) Merry Christmas, Pashang to you and yours. Be well and be blessed:)
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Date: 12/21/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you my good friend, have a blessed and Merry Christmas ....
Date: 12/21/2016 4:42:00 AM
- A touching and wonderful story, Pashang - A 7 - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you my love... Merry Christmas and happy new year...

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