Dog Eat Dog World

Sweat through labor's fervent pace.
You pitiful dog,
You minuscule cog,
Lest you vanish off the face
Of the earth without a trace.

Don't dare threaten profit gain
When you don't understand
Why wealth could own the land
For which your fathers died in vain.
That you may see your heroes slain.

If you find you disagree...
Take to the streets,
Face my marching fleets.
Just hold your ground and do not flee.
Your weaknesses are mine to see.

Yet, if the fear has gripped your heart.
Don't act like a jerk.
Just go back to work,
And let me fuel your tortured art,
Before I rip your soul apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 9:04 AM
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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 7:39 AM
I was gonna congratulate you for spelling it correctly, but you used spel-chek? ...you bad boy! K.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Splendid flow and rhyme scheme my friend! ...graphically portrayed, with stark language and imagery... Well done indeed!! Best wishes, Keith
Loving Iii Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 3:41 PM
poor johnny he will eventually have to share. jhl
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 1:16 PM
'...your weaknesses are mine to see,' ...such splendid phrasing my friend; just one of many!! Your servant, Keith
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 1:14 PM
Anyone who spells minUscule correctly is a GIANT in my eyes!!! Magnificent rhyme scheme and unforgettable content! BRAVO my friend!!!! Best wishes, Keith
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 12:26 PM
For which you will see your sons slain. ..the repetiton will emphasis the important concept & so would the alliteration. What are the "marching fleets"? The ..bull dog is the moneyed elite..the worker the bone. Good rousing verse..pump up the volume! Light & Love
Anderson Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 11:23 PM
wow! this is amazing my brother. it has the anger and raw passion of a young nikki g. bravo!
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 8:27 PM
Nice work, Yoni. Fear and disdain can certainly "fuel tortured art" and "rip your soul apart. Great insight on wealth owning the land even though lives are shed to ppreserve it.
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