Does She?

When we broke up,
My world just stoped,
But you didn't care,
You did not shed a tear,
You go out with her,
But I don't know for sure,
But I still love you,
So I have to ask this to her you too,
Does she lay her head upon your chest,
when you both just want a rest,
Does she kiss your lips with gentleness,
Could she love you anyless,
But there is one question i have to ask and do,
Does she love you the way I do?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Guzzi Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:11 PM
Your form is rhyme, it's sad but in the situation you discribe it's not the brain which is in charge? Light & Love
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Nice romantic write...with love...old Jack
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