Does It Help

When you read, what I write, does it help you feel alright?
Like when you, were a child, and you got tucked in at night.
So the monsters couldn't get you, and the bed bugs couldn't bite.
When you read, what I write, does it help you feel alright?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 11, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Hi William, this is an awesome write, I see my sister enjoyed it too, while sneaking on my account years ago. She hasn't stopped after 5 years. LOL, anyways. Enjoyed. SKAT
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January 17, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Ok, I've read a few and I will say that it should help, Clarence! Good job. Thanks for sharing and keep writing more! Always, Annalise
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January 17, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Well, I guess, William, I will have to go read some more and then come back with an answer. Love this as it's good to get instant feedback.. Always, Annalise...will be back!
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January 17, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Interesting William, thanks for sharing once again,..p.d.
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