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Does He Know What He's Doing?

Does he know what he's doing? To his very own sister She can't eat or sleep She always worries about him It's almost like he doesn't care Does he know what he's doing? Tries to take his own life Leave the ones that love him He wants the suffering to stop They only try to help Does he know what he's doing? Ignoring all the help He says he's alright But his loved ones still fight They say this is good for him But will he ever really change? Does he really know what he's doing?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/3/2009 6:43:00 PM
Amazing Mande, This is bar far one of my favorites of your work:)
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:27:00 PM
When love one put themselves in a bottle we can see them, but cannot touch them through their shield of glass ... and we have nothing to shield us from the pain ... but prayer.
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