Nancy Jones Poet Rhyme

Does Anybody Really Know What Time It Is

I like four o'clock in the morning
'cause I don't have to deal with peops scorning.
I like seven-thirty, too,
Cause that's when I getta do what I want to.

The afternoon's challenging
I'm crankier then, but often things
Spark me so much that I stay
engaged.

Honestly, I can say
that my favorite time of day
is when I hear a namaste
sincerely.

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This one's by me Nancy Jones
nette, for the contest "In 24 Hours"

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Debbie Guzzi October 8, 2011 at 9:14 PM Time has come again...no place to run..no place to hide...Congrad's I admire you not taking this seriously ..my idol! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 8, 2011 at 2:41 PM Congrats Nancy on a dynamic win with this grandiose poetry superbly crafted luv..enjoy..

John Freeman October 8, 2011 at 9:41 AM Unique rhyme Nancy. To answer your question, "No, I don't believe anyone has a full sense of the lateness of the hour." Smile, Agape, Moses

Jack Horne October 5, 2011 at 10:24 AM LOL, witty piece, Nancy. I loved the 4 am line especially : )

Tony Lane October 3, 2011 at 11:32 AM Namaste Nancy. Do good. Tony Nancy Jones October 8, 2011 at 9:36 PM i try

Dinda Minardi October 3, 2011 at 1:39 AM Awww, this is very sweet. An honest greeting nailed it all! Namaste, Nancy! Are you Indian? I love Indian movies, esp. Shahrukh Khan. (hahaha, too much infos, I guess)