Dodging the Bullet

When death came ‘a calling,’
again thus denied

The future remortgaged
—payment applied

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2020)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/20/2022 5:55:00 AM
This is a wonderfull poem. Because it is so short, each word is essential and packed with image. You must have studied Emily Dickenson to be so economic and evocative.
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 3/20/2022 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Paul. I like Emily but I've never consciously tried to write like her (or anybody).
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