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Sometimes it's real and that's serious but sometimes it's imaginary and that can be serious too.

Doctor, Doctor

Doctor, Doctor,
Look at me!
I'm dizzy, weak and I can't see!

I've got this pain,
It hurts real bad.
In places I didn't know I had.

There must be tests.
There must be pills.
These signs are real, I must be ill.

Doctor, Doctor,
There must be,
Something you can do for me.

Pills or tonic,
A magic potion.
Surely you must have some notion.

What to do,
To ease my pain.
Just to make me whole again.

You're a doctor,
You can see,
Something's really wrong with me.

Give me pills,
And give me meds,
And send me off to sleep in bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/30/2021 12:47:00 PM
Funny one, Poem form is a rhyme. Pangie
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/30/2021 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Pangie, God Bless, JB
Date: 9/28/2021 4:09:00 PM
Hello Judy Ball, this person just wants attention. Hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 10:05:00 AM
Hello Judy, LoL. You are welcome. God Bless.
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/29/2021 7:03:00 AM
lol Thanks so much Darlene. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/28/2021 2:49:00 AM
Lol, enjoyed your humour Judy, hope it's a fictional write. Tom
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/28/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom. I wrote this to show how doctors are often expected to know everything and be able to pull rabbits out of hats. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/28/2021 1:53:00 AM
Hi Judy, I could relate; I agree whether real or imagined, they are both serious. I enjoyed the humorous touch to a not so “ funny” situation. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/28/2021 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/27/2021 10:36:00 PM
Lovely poem, so full of fun. Hope you'll get some relief. Hugs.
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/28/2021 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. I wrote this to show how doctors are expected to know everything and be able to pull rabbits out of hats. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/27/2021 6:27:00 PM
This is funny, indeed, JB. It was such a fun read. More....more.....
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/28/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Milton. Glad you got a kick out of it. God Bless, JB
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