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Do You Think You Can Relate?

Do you think you can relate to all that's been happening to me? A year ago I fell in love with a more than gorgeous girl. It's funny how two souls find each other but never speak. As I fell into a deep trance her troubles continued to haunt her and her family. It wasn't too long ago that I FINALLY saw her face! It's been 6 months, you know! But I felt something wrong. Was it the look on her face that dragged me down or was it just a feeling I had that went about? The next day I hear the horrible news of her sister being scarred by her boyfriend now Ex. That feeling I had was not a waste for when she arrived at the party she had needed to ask me a question but I wasn't there anymore. I guess I just couldn't deal with the pain anymore. She was scarred with a knife, a line through her face. I never thought this feeling meant anything. If only I had listened to it.....maybe should would be safe and sound playing around with the girl of my dreams but instead she's in the hospital.....and it's all my fault. Poem # 100, that's a fact and unfortunately so is this poem

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Date: 7/15/2010 10:28:00 AM
Was truly a pleasure to be able to read your poetry today John. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2010 6:18:00 AM
We all have our problems and go through hard and scarring times (some do). Enjoyed your write today. I can relate. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Love, Susan
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Date: 7/14/2010 7:09:00 PM
Yes John we have all been through ..if not this.. something just as difficult .. enjoyed sharing your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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