Do You See

I need you
I love you
I see you
do you love?
are you in love?
can you see
do you see me
but what is there to see
a hollow shell
a love with no key
in a room of a thousand keys
to every door
to every heart
is mine there?
no it is not
do you see
i have no key
i have no heart
the key you stole
and when i had no key to give
i ripped out my heart 
and gave you my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 1:52 PM
wow justin very sweet profession of love, this was a good write and also i loved the last 6 lines. Jo
Guzzi Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 5:59 PM
sad love story! read Love? Bah! you'll feel better..we all go through it like chicken pox.
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 11:04 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Justin. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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