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Do You Remember the Feeling

Do you remember the feeling, that feeling you just could not describe? It from which comes deep within your soul, the pitting itch that gives you an anxious vibe. Do you remember the feeling, that one that makes you feel so alive? It takes you by surprise, it's that moment when you first seen their eyes. Do you remember the feeling, when they first said your name? Your hands started trembling, you fight for just the right things to say. But suddenly.. Do you remember the feeling, when they first said goodbye? their eyes no longer the same, you no longer wanted to go on living, but you still fight for just the right things to say.

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Date: 11/21/2014 7:31:00 PM
Excellent poem! I really enjoyed reading your piece Brandon! A 7 for me! :) Love and light! xxxx D.
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Brandon Reese
Date: 11/21/2014 7:35:00 PM
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! =)

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