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Do You Remember

Remember the night I snuck you in. And we reminisced in till the sun rose. I swore I'd never let go And you looked at me and said, "I love you". Remember the day you said you'd stay. No matter what and all the talk. And we layed on the beach and never moved, Just looked at each other in till the moon broke. Remember the day you left. You said it wasn't me just a feeling you had. And how you would always love me no matter what, But that just made the both of us soak. Remember the day you said, "hey". And spat out all those corny lines, About how I made you whole day rhyme, And How you made a huge mistake that could be fixed in time. Remember the day I moved away. And all you could say, Was i'll miss you day after day. And the way I left will never leave my mind, A finial kill locking you and I. -Eddie Cox

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Date: 11/30/2010 10:19:00 AM
can feel the sadness
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your writing with us today. Love, Carol
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