Do You Really Know Who I Am

You've seen me by a million names,
You've read all about my pain,
but do you understand me? Do you know who I really am?

My head is pounding slightly, 
Sometimes I lose my eyesight,
my body likes to destroy me. It doesn't much care who I am. 

My tears slide down my cheeks,
my knees are actin pretty weak, 
but do you really know me? 

My home life is a mess,
I fall in love deeply and get depressed,
I speak in flowing words as if everything were nature,

My eyes are ever changing, untrusting and availing,
leading me down whatever path I must,
I've been a broken doll,
I've been a caged animal,
A million different things,
But do you really know me
Im faceless, Ever changing in your dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Debrosse Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:38 AM
"speak in flowing words as if everything were nature"- really digs deep nice writing Jessica
Debrosse Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:37 AM
"speak in flowing words as if everything were nature"- really digs deep nice writing Jessica
Madonsela Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 1:45 PM
powerful write.i liked how u kept your emotions raw through out this peice. I loved ur poem
Madonsela Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 1:45 PM
powerful write.i liked how u kept your emotions raw through out this peice. I loved ur poem
Culverhouse Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 9:44 AM
The elusive dream love?? Intense yet never acquired.
Ball Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Hmmmm Sounds like every confused person that ever lived no matter what their age. A good write with an important message. Good Stuff, God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Jessica. Love and blessings, Carol
Matheny Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Wow.. I feel ya.. -Ali <3
Smith Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Wonderful read this afternoon. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
Foulk Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:49 AM
very touching and moving piece of beautiful poetry.
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