Do You Love Me

Picking these petals off these flowers.
Listening to the thunder and rain showers.
Feeling my heart recieving another crack,
Not knowing if you ever coming back.

Do you love me?
Do you not?

Hoping for these petals to give me a reply.
But they say nothing and the flower dies.
My hearts a game and I'm losing quick.
I think of you plays and I'm feeling sick.

Do you love me?
Do you not?

These questions are haunting and I'm not sure.
With the water in my eyes my vision is blurred.
I guess I'll never know as I lay in my bed.
I hold onto my hearts pieces, my answer left unsaid.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Sometimes it's better to let go then to forever wonder, when real love comes there will be no questioning it. Touching write! Sweet win! Hugs
Oyewole Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
A   Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Karly. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA
Goolman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 12:28 PM
BACON!
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:27 PM
this is precious. Glad I saw it reading Brian's winner list tonight. Big congrats to you.
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 11:13 AM
A beautiful poem here karly.Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Karly. Love, Carol
Dendinger Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:23 PM
:) you write some good poems carly
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