Do You Know Who You Are

your the dirt i walk on everyday
your the one who calls me names
your the who hits me your the one who hurts me
not just my heart but my whole self-esteem
your like a bacteria thats disintegrate in my hands
your like a joke that washes in the sand
your like a witch in halloween 
not just scary but your mean
you were like that all your life
because you didn't get treated right
now you take it out on everyone and me
its okay cause you've set me free
you feel that way cause you hold it in
so let it out will let you win
you brought me here 
you scare me with fear
you make me fly 
when your sky high
you make me laugh 
you make me cry 
you make me sing when your fine
you can tell the difference between a lie
some day you will die
you are very strong 
you know right from wrong
do you know who you are?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/16/2010 5:27:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Janae. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:05:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this harsh reality poetry tonight.. hope this is an expressive of your creative genius and not a real situation for u to be dealing with as abuse if never right... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 3/13/2010 12:19:00 PM
Good work!
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Date: 3/13/2010 9:53:00 AM
VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP FALESHIA
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