Do You Hear Me Now

I might as well have been a wall.
No one seem to hear me.
It seem I speak no sound comes out,
for I get no feed back.
I'm so tired asking "did you hear me?"
I'm starting to get so fed up,
due to you not caring enough to anything I say.
No one will hear do you hear me,from me again.
Now I'm gone, you're wishing you had listen to me sooner.
It took me leaving for anyone to hear me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nioma. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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August 9, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Congrats nioma on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Nioma. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 10:53 AM
I can feel the frustration coming through in this piece, keep the faith and stay true to yourself, tc Wilma
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July 21, 2010 at 10:47 AM
I loved your poem... just remember: "Never Back Down Never give in Put up the fight 'cause your gonna win" -RED
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