Do You Feel Lucky

an itch or a scratch
     may cause a nasty red rash 
           or nice purple patch
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Radice Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 2:44 AM
Id have to ask myself a question first: Do I feel lucky? Well, do I? :) Your poems, David are always much more than just skin deep. Cheers - Gary
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Heya Gary, yeah this one is all about luck, and signs that may foresee it coming, people swear an itchy left palm is fortuitous, others don't believe a word, and perhaps just develop a rash from scratching at it, sometimes I wonder if fate is preordained, and just appears chaotic, cheers David
Flaherty Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Well then David Call me Rashly McNasty Scratch
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Ok Christopher so I'm guessing no purple patch for you, best keep scratching away so,
Cunningham Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:53 PM
I'll take my chance on the rash, beats looking into the barrel of a. 44 magnum lol. Tom
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November 1, 2021 at 2:28 PM
Lol, I'll go for the purple patch Tom, itchy left palm, leave Dirty Harry to his big guns, cheers David
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