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Do You Feel?

I hope, you see my pain. Life won't cope, it drives me insane. I wish, you feel my sorrow. My fire will diminish, there is no tomorrow! How, do I know your not lying? Now, is my time for dying. Bow, your head to stop crying. Just go, away from me. You know, this cannot be. With every ounce, of anger, my fist start to fly, into his face! Ready to punce, watch out for this danger. He will DIE, and you will leave this place. Do you feel, MY AGONY? My heart can't heal, DON'T YOU SEE? Just leave, I cannot bear your sight. I can't believe, all the times you said we'd be alright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/1/2008 6:48:00 PM
Hey read my new poem GoodBye! and tell me what you truely think about it. . .
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Date: 9/1/2008 7:29:00 AM
steven, very good poem. love it. i could rele feel ur feelings in this poem. once again great job.
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