Jessica Arteaga Poet Rhyme

Do You Believe In God?

May you tremble as I tweak?
My mind's been going; it's been bleak..
I feel you pray inside your mind,
but why not speak your words of rhyme?
Do you feel your strength will go,
If I would hear; think I would blow?
I touch your face, I feel your sweat,
you are the insect that's trapped in my net.
But if I would say I'd let you go,
by simply letting loose of your installed grasping woe.
Your woe which it is, believing in this, 
forever being that you haven't even heard hiss.
But do think it up twice,
I'm being rather nice;
give up his thought, and I'll let you live.
But give up his word and die old with that sin...






("Do you believe in god? Written on the bullet? Say yes, I'll pull the trigger." From the
band FLYLEAF song CASSIE Was listening to it and made me write this.)

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Steven Mcmorrow August 12, 2009 at 7:35 PM Thank you very much for commenting on my poem. And may I say you have a good taste in music. Your poetry is really well written and I hope you do keep up the good work.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2009 at 10:39 AM Good afternoon Jessica. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire August 11, 2009 at 4:25 AM Very original, Jessica. I certainly do believe in God though there are things that happen in this world that make me wonder why He gave us free will to create our own destinies. Great work! Love, CArolyn

Diane Christian August 11, 2009 at 3:22 AM many are being killed eevry day because they love God in other countries, butt hey refuse to compromise their faith this poem is a great write and an inspiration to stand and fight for what we believe in regardless of the cost, Jesus died for us we should do the same for him if anyone tries to force us to renounce our love, my husband would say pull the trigger if someone asked him, eaither way we go to heaven, if we live we go to heaven eventualy if we die we still go to heaven, God bless you

Diane Christian August 11, 2009 at 3:18 AM a great message, someone told my husband they had to compromise to do prophecy, but how much would they compromise their faith, we doing a topic on this at home, me and my husband love studying, this si going on my fave list, God bless you from diane .

Derrick Burton August 10, 2009 at 10:06 PM this is great.... enjoyed the lesson within the poem.... got to fav it.. enjoy your night:)