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do u love me or do u care what would u do if i wasn't there? is this love or is it lust are u someone i can trust ? can u fix me when im broken using words still unspoken? if my heart was in your hand would you love me and understand, understand the words i speak and understand the things i seek? Do you Would you ?

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Date: 9/30/2011 9:25:00 PM
Well, this expresses a lot of understandable questions that are only resolved by time and good judgement. Not easy to be a judge of character, is it? I have often given people the benefit of the doubt. But if it looks and smells like a skunk--ouch! Your poem is very nicely done. I enjoyed it a lot. The rhyme scheme is fun. Thanks
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