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Do Not Sin


Life hard, 
bliss rare, 
all selfish,
is this hell? ~

No! 
But becomes 
if we 
sin 
~~~
For Line Gauthier, Bite Size Poem no13

03.07.2021

10th grademonoku

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Gershon Wolf

July 5, 2021 at 3:25 PM

OK. I can drink (a glass of water) to this one... ~ Constantly Repenting

Supraja Kannan

July 4, 2021 at 10:46 AM

So true... So beautifully described in very few words...

Rama Balasubramanian

July 4, 2021 at 7:07 PM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!

Judy Ball

July 4, 2021 at 7:42 AM

It is true that we get a little glimpse of what Hell is like right here on earth. Especially if we stray from the protected path God would have us walk. Good stuff here my friend. God Bless, JB

Rama Balasubramanian

July 4, 2021 at 10:33 AM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!

Jennifer Proxenos

July 4, 2021 at 12:14 AM

So ture don't sin for we won't get in and that is shame and realistic fear, for going to God we all hold dear. GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Rama Balasubramanian

July 4, 2021 at 10:33 AM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!