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Do Not Sin

Life hard, bliss rare, all selfish, is this hell? ~ No! But becomes if we sin ~~~ For Line Gauthier, Bite Size Poem no13 03.07.2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2021 3:25:00 PM

OK. I can drink (a glass of water) to this one... ~ Constantly Repenting

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/4/2021 10:46:00 AM

So true... So beautifully described in very few words...

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/4/2021 7:07:00 PM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!

Judy Ball

Date: 7/4/2021 7:42:00 AM

It is true that we get a little glimpse of what Hell is like right here on earth. Especially if we stray from the protected path God would have us walk. Good stuff here my friend. God Bless, JB

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/4/2021 10:33:00 AM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/4/2021 12:14:00 AM

So ture don't sin for we won't get in and that is shame and realistic fear, for going to God we all hold dear. GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/4/2021 10:33:00 AM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/3/2021 10:25:00 PM

Rama, a simple to say big truth so many of us deny. Your verse appears simple but truly is not. Poems often serve as God’s reminders. Thank you.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/4/2021 10:32:00 AM

Thanks. Take care, God bless!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/3/2021 4:24:00 PM

Sin certainly makes the world a worse place, distorting the beautiful reality that might have been. I enjoyed reading this gem, Rama. :)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/3/2021 6:49:00 PM

Thanks, take care, God bless!