Do Me a Favor - Another Version

Give me strength and knowledge, 
Break my shackles from all bondage, 
Let my soul acknowledge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:22 PM
wow, i only see when i want. i like your haiku Sandeep. ~SKAT~
Dey Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 3:10 AM
Thank you so much. Love, sandeep
A   Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Hi Sandeep, a very deep way to approach the strength and knowledge we lack... hope your prayers are acknowledged..xox~ Linda
Dey Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Linda, one day I would like to see myself the way I think now, need to act and time as always the greatest enemy, or may be not time, we are our greatest enemy!!, best wishes, sandeep
De Burca Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Great piece. Nicely penned.
Dey Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Thank you so much for your appreciation.
Phillips Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Very nice piece resonating a powerful message.
Dey Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 1:03 PM
A hearty thanks for your appreciation..
Shines Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 8:32 AM
nice write .have a great weekend
Dey Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 1:03 PM
thank you. you too have a nice weekend.
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