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Do It Your Way

If I'm not normal should I conform
and seek to perform as all do
or should I reach to perfect my form
and be how I was born true 

There's safety in numbers
but this one wonders
if one mind wanders 
walks afar in sunder
while others slumber
standing to ponder
previous blunders
could the one that wanders
understand wonders
give back to numbers
who will then wander
beyond to yonder
as those once stunners
become common runners

out of the box thinking stuns some numb,
it's a heavy weight knockout they come undone
for others to have thoughts you wrestle is fun
a combination they shuffle like a champion

commoners thoughts pace up and down
the same sites with the same sounds
facing lows and heights on the same grounds
hoping to sight delights unfound

but it's not how I do as I venture out on random paths
the way untraveled collect clues bits quarters make halves
with half an idea plough through though told it's daft 
until I announce I've something new which stops laughs

so should I conform against my nature
work to reform and advance my stature
live untrue to me as though an actor
allow only unnatural attributes to factor

why misplace and waste so it's untraced 
and put in its place the common taste
when I could embrace what can't be replaced
and chase it and ace with my victory face

POTD 9/7/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/28/2019 6:45:00 AM
sorry for the very late replies, I dont received notifications and this one must have slipped the mind, I guess I do it my way lol
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Date: 8/8/2019 4:45:00 PM
Nice piece. Thumbs up.
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:44:00 AM
thank you
Date: 8/8/2019 3:30:00 AM
Now there is a clever boy. Looking at my effort's I think that I am flogging a dead horse.
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Date: 7/23/2019 6:09:00 PM
Indeed, do it your way, Nick! Your poetic talent shines with thoughtful eloquence in your amazing poem. A brilliant piece. Belated congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:45:00 AM
:) Thank you Susan
Date: 7/14/2019 8:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Nick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2019 6:29:00 AM
Congrats muppet on your great accomplishment! Make s girl proud!;)
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:46:00 AM
Thank you BENDA
Date: 7/12/2019 3:13:00 PM
A fine piece of writing Nickl, congrats on being POTD!
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:46:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/12/2019 1:29:00 AM
Amazing poem -loved every line! What a delight to read tonight..-JWE
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:46:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/11/2019 10:56:00 PM
Stay true to who you are!! That certainly is best!! Congratulations Nick, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:47:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/11/2019 1:01:00 PM
you always think outside the box Nick and that is what makes you you and never change!:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Jan :)
Date: 7/11/2019 12:17:00 PM
Hi Nick, Always be YOU! Congrats on your win . It was deserved:-) Alexis
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Alexis :)
Date: 7/11/2019 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/11/2019 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Nick! xomo
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/11/2019 7:31:00 AM
Cleverly done Nick...keep doing it your way my friend and...Congrats!! on your POTD!!...sending love...^WW^ :o)
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you WW :)
Date: 7/11/2019 7:16:00 AM
Good Morning Honorable Winner of the POTD! Big congratulations from Panagiota Romios! " To thine own self be true, and it follows, as day follows night, that thou canst not be false to any man." I share your feelings and it's in many of my poems. I understand the crowd going the other way! The whole world pushes us to get along, even where the sheep are going off a cliff. You can't escape being you! Just be you. Panagiota Well written and rhymed.
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Date: 7/11/2019 5:29:00 AM
Always be yourself Nick, if people don't like it ,tough. Congratulations on POTD. Tom
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Tom :)
Date: 7/11/2019 4:39:00 AM
Nick, congratulations on POTD, nicely done!
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Tania :)
Date: 7/11/2019 4:09:00 AM
An expressive write that shines Nick! Congratulations on your wonderful POTD! : )
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 7/10/2019 3:26:00 PM
Never confirm muppet you are amazing as you are!;) and dang your writing is perfect with its flow and rhymes! Wow again! My muppet has really grown up!;)
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 6:49:00 AM
yeah dont confirm...… do-nut lolol

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