Do It Over and Do It Correct

You see I am from perfection, in perfect world.....

 I am here to tell you what you don't know...

 what I think you need to know....

 should know...

 Yes, you are my invention..

 Yes you have the choice to choose, only because I am curious, just like you..

 but what fool would say no...being nursed, after a stab to the heart

 For love.?... I am more than your "love" and I don't feel!

 you are weak and dying and feel everything

 I will protect you, but you must allow me to control everything of you

 for your sake, you are your own destruction

 Say yes with everything you have left

 it will be hard, you will cry and want it all to end

 but you are constructed to bare much

 you keep busy to ignore me! I become rage!

 to tune out my voice!

 look around you! LOOK!

 with full force, let me control you!

 you had many chances, opportunities, all gifts from me

 you in your stubborn pride turn them down

 so I punished you, yes I was harsh, but only to get your attention

 now... listen to me very carefully

 and stop horsing around

 your gifts are like lightning on the darkest night

 you want friends and love and people around

 we have been here before and you know the outcome

 focus!

 focus and spend time with me

 I will hurry and help you

 you belong to me alone

 and where we meet you have no voice, I enjoy that

 We meet in SILENCE...in your STILLNESS

 and you enjoyed it too, I know boasted to the others

 you never see my face, its for your own good

 Love, I don't know what it is, but does it matter? Tell me...

 I am what you need, what you wanted all these years has poisoned you

 understood...... no need to answer, it was not a question.

 (c)LadyFiOct282013GD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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