Do I Love You

Let me see, Is the ocean blue and deep?
 Do I see visions of you while I sleep?
 I long for you to touch my very soul
 And wrap that body around me while I'm cold
 I would kiss you from your head to each of your toes
 Because mostly I love you to the bottom of that beautiful nose
 Really I am always sad and I cry when you leave
 Mostly for you are my hero and when I cry I wipe my nose on your sleeve
 You make everything better for me, the food, the water, the air
 Everything you see, that you touch that touches me to is fair
 I love you even when you're not there, I've never before felt my heart beat
 And loved this way and felt someone and quiver being under the sheets
 Only you, only you could ever do this to me bring me to life to live
 Make my womanly parts come alive for you and want to give
 You my whole self forever, don't leave me, I'll just die if you do
 I can't breathe, I just know and it will be so true
 Without you I won't exist anymore
 I'll lie down and just stop breathing right here on the floor
 I need you, I love you, do you hear me? 
 Don't leave me, I want you, do you fear me?
 My absence, my silence, my all loving for you
 Please tell me again and again and again I LOVE YOU............

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/18/2015 5:40:00 AM
Wow, He must be lucky to have you I enjoyed reading this poem, it has an epic end especially that you love him, i believe he has read this piece Keep writing Dear Bryan
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Date: 5/17/2015 12:14:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Faith :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:34:00 PM
Faith, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/16/2015 8:23:00 AM
The words are music to any ears. Faith, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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