Doris Culverhouse Poet Dizain

Dizain Doctor Ram

ababbccdcd 8or10 syll.


Autumnal Coolness

Poetry and life come close to relief
Cool delicate breeze wisp away my cares
Autumn processes dormancy upon leafs
Crisp crackles under foot reminds me, pears!
Juicy sweet tart pears enough to share

Wind in the fair willow billows and shakes
Leaves fall like raindrops pick up the stiff rakes
Tomorrow we sweat wonder where's the cool
Today is mild and pleasant grey on lake
Tomorrow maybe rough like firstclass fool




Contest: Dizain
Sponsor:  Dr. Ram Mehta

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Sara Kendrick September 8, 2011 at 12:45 PM Enjoyed your creative work..Reads like a winner in Dr. Ram's contest..Thanks for stopping by..Cody came yesterday to get all his worldly possessions so I did not feel like going last night..Your comments were uplifting..Mom

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 5:25 PM Doris: Good luck with your entry in the “Dizain” poetry contest as Dr. Ram Mehta judges. CR

Jack Horne September 7, 2011 at 5:07 PM Beautiful imagery, Doris. Oh, LOL, sorry - I thought that was the painting's name (just shows how much I know about Art...)

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2011 at 9:32 PM I love the images of autumn in this one, especially when you mention those juicy pears and the crisp crackles under foot!

Robert Ball September 6, 2011 at 3:32 AM liked to read but three words, turns out brilliant, thank you for kind words. God bless

Nancy Jones September 5, 2011 at 10:00 PM me too. :)