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Dizain Doctor Ram

ababbccdcd 8or10 syll. Autumnal Coolness Poetry and life come close to relief Cool delicate breeze wisp away my cares Autumn processes dormancy upon leafs Crisp crackles under foot reminds me, pears! Juicy sweet tart pears enough to share Wind in the fair willow billows and shakes Leaves fall like raindrops pick up the stiff rakes Tomorrow we sweat wonder where's the cool Today is mild and pleasant grey on lake Tomorrow maybe rough like firstclass fool Contest: Dizain Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta

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Date: 9/8/2011 12:45:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative work..Reads like a winner in Dr. Ram's contest..Thanks for stopping by..Cody came yesterday to get all his worldly possessions so I did not feel like going last night..Your comments were uplifting..Mom
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Date: 9/7/2011 5:25:00 PM
Doris: Good luck with your entry in the “Dizain” poetry contest as Dr. Ram Mehta judges. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 5:07:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Doris. Oh, LOL, sorry - I thought that was the painting's name (just shows how much I know about Art...)
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:32:00 PM
I love the images of autumn in this one, especially when you mention those juicy pears and the crisp crackles under foot!
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:32:00 AM
liked to read but three words, turns out brilliant, thank you for kind words. God bless
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:00:00 PM
me too. :)
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