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Divorce From Within the Deep

Father and Mother, do you not see that your child pays most ~ your divorce.

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/15/2016 6:04:00 AM

So true, so true.

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/12/2016 9:21:00 AM

very sad poem. In case of divorce children pay much more than parents. Rightly said my lovely friend. 7 here i think. Loved always, bl

Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/19/2016 5:41:00 PM

You're too kind. Thanks Bl.

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/11/2016 7:10:00 PM

A modern haiku, and at the risk of sounding like a copycat, this is evocative too... Welcome to POetrySoup, Luaer! Keep writing, keep posting, and continue to visit other poets. :-) Kim

Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/19/2016 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Kim for the kind words... I will do just that.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/11/2016 3:05:00 PM

- A great haiku, Luaer ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/19/2016 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Anne.