Divorce

Desperately needing a release to find Individuality of myself Voiding all legal contracts and becoming Obsolete to my ex Recollecting past memories of my younger happier days Capturing that smile I once wore Everything works out in the end

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/26/2023 3:27:00 PM

a nicely done acrostic, Karen. I appreciate how you ended it on a positive note. Best wishes with the contest.

Karen Croft
Date: 11/26/2023 6:53:00 PM

Thank you

Ink Empress

Date: 11/26/2023 12:10:00 PM

I love your take on divorce. Beautiful. And that last line too is brilliant and shows hope: everything works out in the end. And your opening line is excellent: pleasure reading this. Goodluck for the contest

Karen Croft
Date: 11/26/2023 12:27:00 PM

Thank you very much