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Dark clouds have shifted revealing the moon Bliss bubbles burst forth in exuberance To the rhythm divine, our heart does swoon To highs and lows of life, we are immune Recognising this dream as but a dance Dark clouds have shifted revealing the moon Knowing we are but dust, each breath a boon Head and heart aligned, erect is our stance To the rhythm divine, our heart does swoon Our radiant heart, a boundless lagoon Holds steady soul, in every circumstance Dark clouds have shifted revealing the moon We are truly blessed, joy currents cocoon We are suffused in a sublime fragrance To the rhythm divine, our heart does swoon Each node of form’s pierced by the bliss harpoon Romance beauteous, our soul’s dalliance Dark clouds have shifted revealing the moon To the rhythm divine, our heart does swoon 31-March-2022

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Date: 3/31/2022 9:15:00 PM
Wow...beautiful written, Unseeking Seeker. I know the difficulties of the form, so I congratulate you on your excel-lence! I loved it, but then I love all well-written villanelles. Thanks for sharing this with all of us.
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Date: 3/31/2022 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Milt! I recall that I wrote in this form for the first time for a contest sponsored by you

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