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28/11/2024

Pick-A-Title, Vol 47 Poetry Contest

Edward Ibeh

The woman whose eyes tell a tale of a different story captures my curiosity. Wiser than her peers, whom she has fooled with a nonchalant exterior and disregard for her surrounding animosity. I see a heart and a real mind that's full of kindness and generosity. Fierce and gritty, humour sharp and witty. Witnessing her side of madness she's kept hidden from the world, to me is such a pity. I am intrigued by the woman who smiles at me from across the room, so charmingly and pretty. Observing as she tucks a loose strand of ringlet curls behind her ear, truly feels sublime, I could listen to that laugh forever, a timeless-sounding chime. Slowly in my direction and then closely walking by, the floral scent she left behind is sweet and intoxicatingly divine. I've yet to think of how, nor do I know when, but the woman whose eyes are full of tales, one day will be mine. To be her true self always. To feel loved all of the time

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Date: 12/12/2024 3:14:00 AM
"To be her true self always. To feel loved all of the time" - grand story of self-discovery. Congratulations!
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Julianne Williams
Date: 12/12/2024 5:04:00 AM
Thank you dearly! I also enjoy your pen work, have a great day, Julianne xx
Date: 12/11/2024 9:13:00 PM
Julianne, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem. I'm glad I discovered you. Great job!
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Julianne Williams
Date: 12/12/2024 5:00:00 AM
Wow.. Reading the lovely feedback has made my day. I sincerely appreciate my placement in your contest. Many thanks! All the best, Julianne x

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