Tim B Poet Couplet

Dividends

Partial to a summer's day
Never left the winter's play

Foolish each and every walk
Never giving in to talk

Finally down on bended knee
He spoke only just to me;

Invest soul'ly in me my loving son,
Find your dividends multiplied a ton

Partial to a winter's pray
Never left the summer's day

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Sara Kendrick April 11, 2012 at 6:40 PM I especially like the fourth couple ..If we only would do that one thing this would be a better place to live..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my work A Blizzard..That happened in 1993 here in the south..We had winds of 65 miles an hour with snow..First in my life and have not had one since..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley April 1, 2012 at 1:13 PM Such tender words offered in prayer Tim; I hope the dividends enriched your life. LUv, Elizabeth

Joe Maverick March 8, 2012 at 1:00 PM I found this to be a good piece to read today Tim,,

Connie Marcum Wong February 15, 2012 at 2:44 AM This poem is awesome! Insightful with a splendid message conveyed in perfect rhyme.

Nette Onclaud February 13, 2012 at 11:26 AM such a splendid request for a son, yim.. your words are tender and soulful; i am awed!..) huggs!

Russell Sivey February 12, 2012 at 4:50 PM This is an excellent poem Tim! I love how you integrated everything into it from a walk to a talk, to prayer about your son, it's all wonderful and well said! I really enjoyed your poem this evening! Great Work!!