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Dividends

Partial to a summer's day Never left the winter's play Foolish each and every walk Never giving in to talk Finally down on bended knee He spoke only just to me; Invest soul'ly in me my loving son, Find your dividends multiplied a ton Partial to a winter's pray Never left the summer's day

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2012 6:40:00 PM

I especially like the fourth couple ..If we only would do that one thing this would be a better place to live..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my work A Blizzard..That happened in 1993 here in the south..We had winds of 65 miles an hour with snow..First in my life and have not had one since..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/1/2012 1:13:00 PM

Such tender words offered in prayer Tim; I hope the dividends enriched your life. LUv, Elizabeth

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/8/2012 1:00:00 PM

I found this to be a good piece to read today Tim,,

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/15/2012 2:44:00 AM

This poem is awesome! Insightful with a splendid message conveyed in perfect rhyme.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/13/2012 11:26:00 AM

such a splendid request for a son, yim.. your words are tender and soulful; i am awed!..) huggs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/12/2012 4:50:00 PM

This is an excellent poem Tim! I love how you integrated everything into it from a walk to a talk, to prayer about your son, it's all wonderful and well said! I really enjoyed your poem this evening! Great Work!!